mummy walking, got the movement of stiff movements like a mummy.

need to add face in mostly all my drawing I always try and not add the face but need to add it to the body because it can also describe the action.

enlarging the hands to make her look more intimating, making it more scary. 

like the black out line on the pose gave a shadow effect on the body. 

looming over someone, intimating. 

using black pen instead of pen, adding the shadows to the body help define the body and the action of the pose.

scared, horrified found that i described it very well in the pose and shadow helped illuminate the model 

drawing around the model help describe the mood of the action and sometime not adding everything you see if better

main part of the action is what the hands are doing and making sure i get the drawing of the fingers right to tell us the action.

looking at shadows again not just on the figure but around her