working small scale in a book, making sure getting the whole body on the page and not missing the hands or feet.

not getting the proportion right on the body, the legs are too short need to be longer but I'm getting the position on the body right.  

only using one line to draw the figure instead doing several lines for the body, it was easier to get the curves on her body.

Prefer the left drawing to the right.

looks robotic, the model look stiff there no movement.